Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
it should be fixed punishments for each kind of crime or flexible punishments is a hot topic for debate, this essay will discuss both these views. even punishments for every type of crime has some advantages, I believe that circumstances and the motivation of an individual crime, should be taken in to account when judging the criminal.
Firstly, we know that fixed punishment is an approach by setting clear punishment to the criminal who has commited. The biggest advantage of this method is easy to judge the criminal and save a lot of time for the council. if the punishment was fixed, it would be easier to find the punishments conclusion, and no one can disagree because it s the rule. More over, people will be careful before they wanna do some bad thing cause they may afraid of the punishments they will get. when the punishments be fixed, every one will know the final conclusion for their crime. As a result, they wont try to break the rules and become a crime.
In contrast, I hold the view that it s necessary to consider about the situation and the kind of crime. In fact, motivation of crime have t taken in to account because it s the most important reason lead to criminal. For example , a person who kill a theif because self-defend should get a little sympathy from the council because they have to protect themselves. In addition, if the criminal was seemed to be more serious than usual, we would use special punishments. For instance, if the criminal involved to children or threaten the life of many people like child rape or product toxic food they deserve to get the highest punishments.
To recapitulate, I think it s better for the council and the crime if we used flexible punishments than fixed punishment even they has some advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70739549839 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70719328152 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514469453376 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9371193416 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400705387343 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143177261123 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136021205425 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276965470358 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16343772762 0.056905535591 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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