Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that the reason for learning a new language is to work or go oversea while the others don’t think so. This eassay will discuss both these views and personally, i think we have many motivations to study a foreign language.
There are several reason why many people argue that work or travel abroad is the only reason for learning a second languages. Firstly, improve the languages of another country is the only way to overcome the language barrier in order to visit or work in a strange country. Although technology develop with a amazing speed today with so many useful translate software but it is necessary for us to use local languages to communicate with local residents. As a result, if we can’t speak or able to understand what local people say, it will be difficult to live or travel in abroad. In addition, every countries set the bar of languages to people who want to be a migrant labour or a foregin student. For example, Canada or Australia require at least 5.0 point Ielts for student who wanna join an university in their countries, in comparision with USA is the minium of 61 TOEFL IBT. Due to some arguments, it can be clearly seen that, learning a foreign language is very improtant to move to a new country.
In spite of the above reasons, I hold a belief that we have than one reason to study a second languages. A strong argument in favour of studies a new language is to understand another culture. The best solution to research about traditional culture of every nation is to understand their mother language. Thus, we can figure it out their history, their foods, their tourist attraction through their stories or by what local people say about their life. Meanwhile, to be an international resident, learning a second language help us make friend with every people from all over world instead just of our nation. Learning English the most common language in the world is an example, if you are able to speak and understand what a person say in English , you will have many chance to get closer with them. Moreover, learning another language can help us enjoy their entertainment production like films, musics or their art. In order to enjoy a novel or a films, the original is the best version because when we use translate version is mean we understand through another person view, we may not able to understand all the meaning of the author. Due to those metrits, people may realize that there are many advantages when they know another language and find some motivations to start.
In conclusion, study a new language is the obligatory condition to travel or work in a foreign country but can gain more benefit when we know a second language so that we have many reason to try our best to learn one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iscuss both these views and personally, i think we have many motivations to study...
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Suggestion: a
... point Ielts for student who wanna join an university in their countries, in compa...
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... have than one reason to study a second languages. A strong argument in favour of studies...
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... understand what a person say in English , you will have many chance to get closer...
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...a person say in English , you will have many chance to get closer with them. Moreover, lear...
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...their art. In order to enjoy a novel or a films, the original is the best version becau...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
... know a second language so that we have many reason to try our best to learn one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, while, at least, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69484536082 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5834486669 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472164948454 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.6376280547 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.842105263 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5263157895 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287270540108 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935216800384 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828743981664 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20842402627 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707198366234 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.