Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, learning a foreign languages is a modern phenomena because humans tries to be make own self multi talented to compete with others. A section of society deems that commuting or working in overseas is the main factor to learn international languages as majority of youngsters migrating the worldwide to earn bread and butter as well as lots of companies providing jobs to those candidates who are multi skilled and speak more than languages rather than mother tongue . On the other hand, another masses neglect this views because many humans learns this language to gain knowledge about their cultures as well as traditions. This easy will shed light on both views along with my perception.
One school of thought supports the former views that main reason for learning a foreign languages is in order to travel or work in the international regions as a vast amount of adults are giving preference to going overseas to get higher education and settle their future regarding their career in these particular nations. In addition to this, today’s era most of developed countries providing higher chances for handsome income giving jobs in their nations to international students as well as adults have a great desire to earn huge wealth so that is why it is essential for them to learn other foreign language to familiar with those regions. For example, Canada who offer a work permit to international students after completion their studies , providing opportunities of permanent residency as well. Even though, many companies now hired to those employees which know multi languages because companies are working with international industries.
The another school of thought believes that learning foreign languages by commuting or working in the whole world is not mandatory cause as there are another aspects are also available to learn these languages and the main is that some people thinks that learning foreign languages should be better for those people who want to get knowledge about the forms, origins and history of these language. Furthermore, if a human becomes desire to gain wisdom about foreign language’s cultures and their natives that what is their rituals, what they wear and etcetera. Moreover, it is generally said that language is the poem of the country. Apart from this, it is essential for humans should be learn international languages to familiar with those regions. For instance, in India a some amount of human nowadays start learning Nepali language because they have desire to gain knowledge about Buddhism and their cultures.
In my prospective, there are many reasons to learn international languages as people have various intentions about learning those languages some learn these for travel or working. However, many masses Learn foreign languages to get knowledge about their nation’s cultures. So it’s not right to say that only one factor is mandatory to learn these.
In conclusion, although, it is crucial to learn foreign languages is in order to commute or work in a overseas but other factors can not be abandoned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2608.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 497.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24748490946 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75343700412 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452716297787 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.0 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4163178863 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.411764706 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2352941176 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5882352941 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379746198537 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132741080544 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828834908176 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23960640688 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673958442015 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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