Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone learn a foreign language.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

From the antient times people tend to learn new languages for different purposes. While some people think that this is benefitial for proffesional prosperity and conveniency of travel, another group of people claimnig that it has variety of benefits for person. As this topic is quite interesting, and demands for detailed analisys prior to coming for coherent conclusion. my views and opinion will be stated on the folowing paraphraphs.
To start with, amid worlwide globalisation several languages are became international and being used and second language everywere. For instance english and Mandarin are accepted as internal and externall communication langugaes for many worlwide companies. As well as english and French languages are thought to be global media and political speche language. Taking into account all point mentioned abowe, for any proffesional or tourist it better to possess several language knowledge and being able to express their thoughts in flexible way.
On the other hand, learning prosess are accepted as enhancing your cultural boarders, as well as, bulding strong intercerebnum communication between brain cells. getting familiar with new languages we are likely to better undestand another cultures and nations, getting more aware about their history and national ideas. Also, it is omnipresent fact that the more langues you know the easier you study new languges.
In counclusion, my opinion is beign familiar with variety of languages has great deal of benefits affecting to all sides of your life. being able to express your opinion in a differen languages may help people to avoid many problems making them closer.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, well, while, for instance, you know, as well as, to start with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45914396887 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77910371573 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4823066167 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160266329006 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574985394146 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349307090139 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942078497414 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406624436977 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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