some people say that the only reason for learning is in order language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country.others
say that these are not the only reasons why someone learns a foreign languages
From the antient times people tend to learn new languages for different purposes. While some people think that this is beneficial for professional prosperity and conveniences of travel, another group of people claiming that it has variety of benefits for person. As this topic is quite interesting, and demands for detailed analysis prior to coming for coherent conclusion. my views and opinion will be stated on the following paragraphs.
To start with, amid worldwide globalization several languages are became international and being used and second language everywhere. For instance english and Mandarin are accepted as internal and external communication languages for many worldwide companies. As well as english and French languages are thought to be global media and political speech language. Taking into account all point mentioned above, for any professional or tourist it better to possess several language knowledges and being able to express their thoughts in flexible way.
On the other hand, learning process are accepted as enhancing your cultural boarders, as well as, building strong intercerebnum communication between brain cells. getting familiar with new languages we are likely to better understand another cultures and nations, getting more aware about their history and national ideas. Also, it is omnipresent fact that the more languages you know the easier you study new languages.
In conclusion, my opinion is being familiar with variety of languages has great deal of benefits affecting to all sides of your life. being able to express your opinion in a different language may help people to avoid many problems making them closer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, you know, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48249027237 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81313000669 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6767207345 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184934734372 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069502396332 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449640068826 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108824534178 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407485471588 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.