some people say that the only reason for learning is in order language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country.otherssay that these are not the only reasons why someone learns a foreign languages

Essay topics:

some people say that the only reason for learning is in order language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country.others
say that these are not the only reasons why someone learns a foreign languages

Learning different languages is an asset .Language eliminates the cultural and terrestrial barriers and help people to air their ideas. It is believed that people become proficient in languages in order to achieve vocational or travel benefits but on the other hand, some people are against this ideas and they believe that language skills will help in other aspects as well. The writer tries to analyze these interesting facts in the following paragraphs, arriving at a logical conclusion.

First and foremost, many people learn a new language for vocational benefits only. To cite one example, for an Asian to work in Europe he has to clear certain language proficiency tests.T his indeed, shows the importance of language in finding a furthermore, for a traveller, languages will act as a guide and will help the person to assimilate more knowledge about the place, culture and tradition.
To follow the discussion through, multiple language fluency will help a person to broaden his global perspective.F or example, language helps to curtail the cultural barriers for a person who moves into a country in search of greener pasture. To continue, language skills might help a child to get into a foreign universities or even enables him for a scholarship. Additionally, multiple language skill will help a person to come out from his nutshell and assist him to excel in life.

Hence, foreign languages do not only help in traveling and work but also in certain other aspects of life as well.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, as to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1012145749 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79724565568 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570850202429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4600703831 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285527897474 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128398789853 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636441119306 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187731528883 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446573431886 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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