The following diagram demonstrates the whole process of converting geothermal power into electricity, which can be divided into two phases, including the upground part and the above land part.
Regarding to the underground part, it covered three steps, being initiated with pumping cold water into the injection well with a depth of 4.5KM.Then, the injected water passed through the geothemal zone(hot rocks) to absorb the heat in this area.
Next step was aiming at pumping the heated water into the production well, where it was pumed up into condenser.
As for the aboive land one, steam from hot water was condensed by condenser, supplying power to the turbine to facilitate it make the generator worked. Simutaneously, the electricity was produced by generator and transported to the grid by the electrical towner.
Overall, the geothermal power plant turned geothermal power into electricity with five steps,which was perfectly illustrated on the relating diagram.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Then
...he injection well with a depth of 4.5KM.Then, the injected water passed through the ...
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...sed through the geothemal zone hot rocks to absorb the heat in this area. Next s...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
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...g power to the turbine to facilitate it make the generator worked. Simutaneously, th...
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Line 6, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...generator and transported to the grid by the electrical towner. Overall, the g...
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...l power into electricity with five steps,which was perfectly illustrated on the relati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, then, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44736842105 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87092478851 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4329936741 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.075083199719 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405364689717 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278118460626 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441902638864 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296815340089 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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