The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The diagram illustrates the process of electricity generation with the aid of geothermal energy, which is energy produced from the heat of the underground.
There are five separate steps that need to be taken in order to produce electricity. As shown in the diagram, these steps are divided into two areas, which are underground zone, and the electricity generator on the surface.
In the beginning, cold water is going to pumped down from the water storage. After going down about 4.5 km, water will be injected into Geothermal zone, also known as hot rocks. Then, the heat from these rocks will heat up the water to be collected in production well. Lastly, this hot water will be pumped up to the surface.
After hot water reaches the condenser, it turns into steam. Furthermore, this steam is going to turn the turbine, which will power the generator to produce electricity. Ultimately, the electricity will go through the wires connected to the electricity lines.
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- Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. 61
- The chart below shows the value of one country's export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. 78
- The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. 11
- The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 yea period from 1980 to 2005. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'pump'
Suggestion: pump
...n the beginning, cold water is going to pumped down from the water storage. After goin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, lastly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06790123457 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70196262786 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0008333218 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122582422889 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537154435377 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690799286341 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100491497728 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727247168455 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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