The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The flow chart shows all stages of producing instant noodles in a noodle factory.

Overall, according to the diagram, there are 8 stages that start with flour storage and end with sealing, which illustrate how instant noodles are produced through the production prosses in a noodle factory.

First of all, flour is stored in storage silos in the factory and then sent to the production line. In the second stage, flour is mixed with oil and water and then turned by rollers into dough sheets in the third stage. In the next step, dough sheets are cut into dough strips, then turned into noodle discs in the fifth stage.

In the sixth stage, noodle discs are cooked with oil and then dried. The cooked noodles are mixed with vegetables and spices and then put in cups at stage 7. In the last stage, all noodle cups are labeled and sent to the market for selling.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nto noodle discs in the fifth stage. In the sixth stage, noodle discs are cooke...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, third, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63225806452 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0327597947 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509677419355 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9082433624 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188173886381 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955425752957 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100249300679 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159101208279 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107077231099 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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