TPO 66
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only.
It is critically important to have knowlege and experts in different skills. In today's hectic world, having abilities in seprate fields is neccessary for having easier life. Personally. I belive people should spend their time to learn different skills to more successful in their life. I feel in that way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, various skills are help full for facing with wast kind of problems in work or life. It needless to say, if someone have wide range of skills, they can solve their problem without asking help from others. My personal experiance is a compelling illustration of this. When I worked on my journal paper, I friquentally faced with graphical problems with my paper's figures. Because I learned to work with two different graphical softwears I solved my issues as soon as possibale without anybody's help.
The other reason pops up in my mind is that finding job for multie skills people is so easer than others. It coms as no surpris, the employers hier people with differents skills since they reduce the demand to hiering other emplyees. Let's imagine a man who can work with both comuters and press michines. When he go to factory for work, he can work as technesian for both press michine and computers. As a reasulte, the owner on factory do not need to heir two people for working with both press machines and comuter, therefore he can save more mony because of his multie skill employee.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that being multie skill is very usefull for become successful in life. This is because of that helps to people can solve alot of problems in their jobs or life, and also it increas the chance of finding jobs for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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It is critically important to have knowl...
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...I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, various skills are help f...
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...or life. It needless to say, if someone have wide range of skills, they can solve th...
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...phical problems with my papers figures. Because I learned to work with two different gr...
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...on as possibale without anybodys help. The other reason pops up in my mind is t...
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...e the demand to hiering other emplyees. Lets imagine a man who can work with both co...
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...th comuters and press michines. When he go to factory for work, he can work as tec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7342192691 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46319919008 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1763048599 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0625 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200718562909 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699008925867 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612165049856 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119540360167 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464561183835 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.