All around the world, the emphasis placed on being successful has always been heavy and there's no shortage of opinion on how to achieve it. Although wisemen from previous centuries would advise people to focus solely on one skill to succeed in life, modern generations including mine would agree that the more the better.
One of the reasons why developing different skills will be more beneficial is because it brings people more satisfaction in their career path. It is safe to say that having focus on improving one single skills does not seem to go well with the ever-changing development of society anymore. Nowadays, more than five basic skills are needed in any job position, so obviously that human resource officers don’t even bother to put them in the job descriptions. Those basic skills, such as technology, communication and collaboration, can be considered the key factors if employees want to do their work well in any working environment. As they keep learning and acquiring new skills, they may advance even further in their career ladder and thus become very successful, which mastering only one skills could not lead them to.
The acquired skills will not only benefit professional life but also have positive impacts on and help bring success to the daily life. By knowing how to do certain things at home, such as cooking and fixing things around the house, one can save an incredible amount of money which might have been spent on paying other experts to do them for him. This contributes to making life flow more smoothly as the finances become better managed. In addition, having soft skills can also get us through life properly, especially when it comes to maintaining and improving our relationships with others. For example, having conflicting opinions with friends wouldn’t be a problem if we have good communication skills that allows us to embrace the difference and have wholesome arguments. Consequently, through developing useful skills, one can also developing a good lifestyle and healthy relationships.
In conclusion, as citizens who live in a society that keeps changing and becoming more complicated, we have to try hard to keep up with the changes by keep learning and improving ourselves. All the skills we learn will definitely pay off, no matter if it’s our professional or personal life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...ng successful has always been heavy and theres no shortage of opinion on how to achiev...
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Line 3, column 788, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one skill', 'a skill', or simply 'skills'?
Suggestion: one skill; a skill; skills
...e very successful, which mastering only one skills could not lead them to. The acquire...
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Line 5, column 840, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
... developing useful skills, one can also developing a good lifestyle and healthy relationsh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0987012987 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79342649333 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.7825727591 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.866666667 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245391976417 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798025228073 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563022848269 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13698107777 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044311434738 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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