The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram depicts the process of instant noodles production that consists of 8 separated stages.
Looking from the overall prospective, the process is not that facile. The manufacturing flow requires not only the usage of sophisticated machinery but also supplement of a bunch of products, such as oil and vegetables, on order to result in ready-to-eat meal.
At the initial stages, the flour is transferred by trucks to the storage silos where it is kept until supplied to mixer, being the starting point of the manufacturing. Once put in the mixer the flour is blended with water and oil in order to obtain plasticity. After that the mass is flattered into wide dough sheets by rollers and cut straight away with the help of dough strips, which transforms the dough into separated noodles disks.
At the following stages, the process begins as soon as the oil is added to the noodles discs to make them tastier and the disks are dried to the needed condition. The following stage is the distribution of the noodles into cups to which the vegetables and spices are added supplying the dish with healthy nutrients. Finally, once the cups are labeled and sealed, they are distributed to supermarkets’ shelves.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e distributed to supermarkets’ shelves.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, look, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97058823529 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81543297238 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0320277648 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115412520604 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466003878439 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704024537821 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893646126814 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852716706337 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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