The diagram below shows how thermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons wherever relevant.
The diagram provide information how electricity is generated from geothermal energy.
Overall, there are five main steps to the process, from pumping cold water down into the geothermal zone, to producing electricity that is then sent into the electric grid.
Firstly, cold water is pumped down through an injection 4.5km underground to the geothermal zone, consisting of hot rocks. The cold water is then heated up by these rocks while flowing through to the opposite end. The heated water is then pumped up via the production well into the condenser.
In the condenser, the hot water is condensed into steam. The steam is then transported to the turbine. As the steam moves through the turbine, it creates a spinning effect that powers the generator, thus producing electricity. The electricity generated is then transferred into the grid via power lines.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 27, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: water
...denser. In the condenser, the hot water water is condensed into steam. The steam is t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, then, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72796365707 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2491379208 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4444444444 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0581516250454 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282165229768 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447048269153 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542133563846 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485759520444 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.