the diagram below shows the information about the amount of money spend on alocol and drugs summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant

Essay topics:

the diagram below shows the information about the amount of money spend on alocol and drugs. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant.

The given vertical graph depict the information of spending money on alcohol or drugs. The is calibrated in dollars.

The most striking feature to be observed is that the, largest money
was spent on on alcohol on every year compare to spending on drugs.

It can be vividly seen that, from 1975 to 1977, spending money on alcohol followed a decreasing trend falling from 146 to 140 .billons of dollars. Further, in 1980 ,a remarkable improvement could be seen and reached at 186 billions of dollars. Then, spending on alcohol decreased slightly.

Turning to rest ofbio description, in case of drugs, between 1975 to 1980, the amount of spending money upsurged slowly from 35 to 102 billions of dollars. Again spending declined remarkably with 65 millions of dollars. As far as comparison is concerned, spending on alcohol in 1975 was four times more compare to spending on drugs.

Votes
Average: 6.9 (11 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rugs. The is calibrated in dollars. The most striking feature to be observed is...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...striking feature to be observed is that the, largest money was spent on on alcohol ...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the largest'.
Suggestion: , the largest
...iking feature to be observed is that the, largest money was spent on on alcohol on every...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: on
...d is that the, largest money was spent on on alcohol on every year compare to spendi...
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Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...decreasing trend falling from 146 to 140 .billons of dollars. Further, in 1980 ,a ...
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Line 6, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...40 .billons of dollars. Further, in 1980 ,a remarkable improvement could be seen a...
^^
Line 6, column 220, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '186 billion'.
Suggestion: 186 billion
...mprovement could be seen and reached at 186 billions of dollars. Then, spending on alcohol dec...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eached at 186 billions of dollars. Then, spending on alcohol decreased slightly. ...
^^
Line 8, column 132, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '102 billion'.
Suggestion: 102 billion
...ending money upsurged slowly from 35 to 102 billions of dollars. Again spending declined remark...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 197, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '65 million'.
Suggestion: 65 million
...Again spending declined remarkably with 65 millions of dollars. As far as comparison is concer...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01351351351 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66233364793 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1798032531 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4444444444 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179047307158 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800642092386 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677204856056 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112198720237 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534866715071 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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