The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog

The information which is showed by the chart is about the life cycle of a frog. Overall, it is seen from the chart that there are 6 steps the cycle process of it where start from the smallest becoming the an adult however experience several transformer.

On the first step, star to mating between the both frogs therefore resulting the little frogspawn. Next, in the second change the frogspawn is becoming small tadpole emerges, then experience slight transformer again in the third step where it is to being tadpole develops.

On the next development as the fourth, the tadpole develops is growing become a young frog where in this conversion, the frog has haven hands and feet, then in the last step is the sixth step the young frog is conversing become mature frog, that it will meet with other frog as well as experience mating also and start to over the cycle again

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
... where start from the smallest becoming the an adult however experience several transf...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun transformer seems to be countable; consider using: 'several transformers'.
Suggestion: several transformers
...ecoming the an adult however experience several transformer. On the first step, star to mating be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70779220779 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40273779864 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.7599051315 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6 5.23603664747 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223002061446 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141856479023 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147417011296 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151675652915 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845185968319 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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