The tendency of human to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extend do you agree?
Nowadays, the fashion is becoming trending topic, the people tend to following the development of it. Even it presence habitual as human to imitate the other who are look stylish.
Base on the fact todays, style is the paramount where growing of it, is booming in every time and people can not to avoid it because the influence is too big, especially for the younger who have tendency to show better fashion even following the style of celebrity. For example, the teenager that is impacted by the rising of fashion will become consumer of the best brand however the popular goods which showed on several advertisements with the popular actor who are wearing a stale as the endorse of the goods. As result, it is due to the environment that encourage this situation therefore it is becoming trending on public. In conclusion, tendency of human to something is natural for with this way the development will affect the society.
On the other hand, the situation where the people given negative affects of the modern clothes popularity and can not to ignore this damages caused by some reasons. Firstly, in community style becoming the first important thing, as of this matter may encourage the crime, for the fashion which is wearing of them sometimes describe their financial then growth of their thief felling. Conversely, the people who tend to wear the modern clothes but the financial not enough to complete it, will support them to commit an offence such us doing a crime. Finally, it is becoming disease as the society, event thought it is natural to use modern fashion or be better style but will make them addict of it then more upgrade their fashion base on the trending until past the limitation..
To sum up, I agree with the statement that is said the human tend to copy the other people, due to the modern environment and want to look better in front of the public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...opular actor who are wearing a stale as the endorse of the goods. As result, it is due to t...
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... matter may encourage the crime, for the fashion which is wearing of them sometim...
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...n the trending until past the limitation.. To sum up, I agree with the statement...
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Suggestion:
...copy the other people, due to the modern environment and want to look better in f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, look, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77064220183 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48780094672 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492354740061 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6529212776 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.818181818 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7272727273 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155795450817 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577051063115 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344108058822 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918312038096 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236649358751 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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