You are writing to your friend who lives in another country. You are inviting him/her to stay with you. There is a public event occurring that you would like him/her to go to with you. In your letter say
- Why and when do you invite him/her?
- Describe the event.
- Suggest other entertainment and things to do during his/her stay.
To Wahyu
Hay Wahyu, I am Wiwi how are you, I hope you are fine. I wrote this letter special to invite you come in my country, this is the best chance for us to meet. While that, I want to tell you that there is a concert and the main star is your favorite celebrity as well as I know that you are really want to join the show of him.
You should come here at 27 december this year, as of before the show, we can hang around together. The event at 30 december, which the location near my boarding house despite there are several performances during the concert that we will watch latter.
Before the event I will show you the whole of my environment here then bring you in some places which have wonderful scenery such as beautiful beach, public walking and great garden. I promise that you will not boring as long as you are here with me. I wait your respond, and I hope you agree with this plan.
Your close friend
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'wanted'.
Suggestion: wanted
...y as well as I know that you are really want to join the show of him. You should ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'bore'
Suggestion: bore
...eat garden. I promise that you will not boring as long as you are here with me. I wait...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21348314607 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04723448689 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6729954003 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395603135591 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173108746889 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828944562664 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254631719433 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130703474883 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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