It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for example for sport or music, and others are not . However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Todays, talent is the important matter and to be consideration in public to reach success, where in communities, it is becoming controversial because some people believe that, some of them are born with certain skills even the others judged that the children can taught to be a sportsman or musician.
On the one hand, basically the ability can be gotten when the people learn it or when it is becoming their habit as well as they are get use to do that. For example, one of the singer who has talent in music that we know when she was still child where her parent are singers also. As result, base on the girl family, will present special environment to the girl in order it is easier to her even if the parent give facilitation about music such as music instrument and following supplement study of music. In conclusion, in this site not agree with the statement that the people is not born with talents.
On the other hand, capabilities is the popular problem todays because some people feel that they are not have skill in fields. There are several way to improve or find out the people abilities. The first, special training is the best to improvement of skill, some companies even government will provide several training in kind of skill to encourage the public reach their purposes. Secondly, the dreaming should be reached, with this inspiration can improve the capabilities of society. Finally, to be a professional sportsman or musician are needed good talent which is must be increased, especially to children who have interesting to rise their competences.
To sum up, the biggest influencer that is make the people is talented are environment and effort, where the both of this things can improve their skills of it, then capture their dream.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as well
...till child where her parent are singers also. As result, base on the girl family, wi...
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Suggestion: had
...ause some people feel that they are not have skill in fields. There are several way ...
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Suggestion: several ways
...are not have skill in fields. There are several way to improve or find out the people abili...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun training seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some training'.
Suggestion: some training
... companies even government will provide several training in kind of skill to encourage the publi...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...vironment and effort, where the both of this things can improve their skills of it, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82838283828 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6404331629 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7931143248 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9090909091 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237990357056 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862141847983 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606518731093 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14351179604 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705909766851 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.