Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, choice is the paramount in people live, where it will determine our future. Some say that many choices provide now. We just chose it as our journey. This essay will discuss about it.
Nowadays, the people tend to decide their own plan however thinking about their destiny in future which is becoming ambition of them where the decision is influenced by the character even hobbies of people. For instance, the younger in college ha different habitual. Some of them active in class subjects, there are several love in field trip then the others adducts to do anything that is informal such as plating games, adventure and each other. As result, many things that can selected by student even tough it is a fault in communities views yet they think that is better for them. In conclusion, the benefit of the choices which is determined by them will influence their luck in the future.
On the other point, because of development as well as some issues from several informants make protective of parents is increase also therefore most of them present the limit choices for their children in order to suitable with their expectation. Whereas, the government tend to pay attention as education along with set up building of it like school, library, museums and others where there are not choices for the younger who loves anything besides education. In addition, people start to determine their choice even left school that is not offer anything that they want.
To sum up, base on the freedom that is given for the people, can explain that many choices todays then I agree with the statement, because the success and fail that is happen basically from the process which people decided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91319444444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39678926179 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7338472782 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123392451593 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461055761389 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365214653199 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877571892872 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370522155148 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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