The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog

the information that is showed from the picture is about the cycle of a life frog. Overall, as we can see, that there are 7 stages of this cycle where the development of it started to mating between the both of frogs until resulting the smallest frogs becoming an adult frog.

Base on the diagram, a couple frogs produce the ages as we know the name is frogspawn where this result as the first step of it. After which, the frogspawn transform to be small tadpole emerges which is has a tail then experience a change again becoming a biggest, it is called tadpole develops.

On the fifth step, the tadpole develops is growing converse to young frog that is has a complete limbs but the tail still exist in this stage as well as to the next development is mature frog, where this type is bigger than before without a tail and have several color on the bag of frog. Finally the frog already to meet with the other frog to reproduction and the cycle start over again

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the information that is showed from the pic...
^^^
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...then experience a change again becoming a biggest, it is called tadpole develops....
^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'limb'?
Suggestion: limb
...se to young frog that is has a complete limbs but the tail still exist in this stage ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... have several color on the bag of frog. Finally the frog already to meet with the other...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, still, then, well, as to, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41899441341 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.278959878 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6401647887 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301272341267 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169609734101 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12636949983 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200022255037 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115045831452 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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