The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.

Essay topics:

The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.

The information given by the table is about monthly expenditure of exchange Australian family in 1991 to 2001. Overall, base on the total showed the data on the table was increase where electricity and water as the highest changed of expenditure in Australian dollar per month.
It was seem from the statistic of illustrate that food, other goods and services were the biggest figure of expenditure that was rising experienced. Food in 1991 was $ 155 than went up to $ 160, next other goods and services had $ 250 slightly grew to $ 270 in 2001. While that, electricity and water were growth dramatically from $ 75 to $ 120 then housing rose just $ 5.
Meanwhile, the other information provided by the table was decrease experienced, such as happened as clothing that was decline until $ 10 from $ 30 in 1991 as the smaller number of expenditure. Finally, the transport which fell in from $70 to $ 45.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...in Australian dollar per month. It was seem from the statistic of illustrate that f...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$155'.
Suggestion: $155
...as rising experienced. Food in 1991 was $ 155 than went up to $ 160, next other goods...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$160'.
Suggestion: $160
... Food in 1991 was $ 155 than went up to $ 160, next other goods and services had $ 25...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$250'.
Suggestion: $250
... 160, next other goods and services had $ 250 slightly grew to $ 270 in 2001. While t...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$270'.
Suggestion: $270
...and services had $ 250 slightly grew to $ 270 in 2001. While that, electricity and wa...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$75'.
Suggestion: $75
...and water were growth dramatically from $ 75 to $ 120 then housing rose just $ 5. ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$120'.
Suggestion: $120
...r were growth dramatically from $ 75 to $ 120 then housing rose just $ 5. Meanwhile...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$5'.
Suggestion: $5
...om $ 75 to $ 120 then housing rose just $ 5. Meanwhile, the other information pro...
^^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$10'.
Suggestion: $10
...ened as clothing that was decline until $ 10 from $ 30 in 1991 as the smaller number...
^^^^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$30'.
Suggestion: $30
...othing that was decline until $ 10 from $ 30 in 1991 as the smaller number of expend...
^^^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$45'.
Suggestion: $45
..., the transport which fell in from 0 to $ 45.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, then, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92052980132 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82323929973 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7875625644 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247320291593 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124680092495 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156877395581 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186331525425 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178881671781 0.0819641961636 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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