Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, the pollution is part of major of problem that is controversial in society. Where, it is becoming the main cause of anything in environment which is happening. This essay will discuss about the effects that is given by this problem.
Nowadays, the biggest problem in nature is climate change, as we know that it is caused by smog as well as the atmosphere which is tainted by the pollutant particles. There are several main reasons about it. The first, the contamination of water which from industrial resource is the biggest contribution of water pollution. The second, the traffic problem presents an impact seriously in environment, the smoke of it polluted the fresh air then influence the health of people. In addition, illness and disease will increase in communities because of this matter. In conclusion, the government should be finding an alternative to avoid this happen.
On the other fact, the human activity is the primary role the pollution happen therefore to reduce it, we need a best solution however supporter from authority such as government and partners in order to we can protect our biosphere. For instance, in several countries, make a law for the people who use a private car, where they are limited to possessive the transport. While that, the criminal offence which is effect the pollution such us dumping, deforestation and the other will given a punishment. As result, the vegetation should be grow and the people who got the damage can go down then the atmosphere still protection without pollution problem that broke the real habitat.
To sum up, I agree with the suggestion that the government as the highest hold of authority obligatory to looking for a solution along with they must move from the fault to keep the society and struggle in healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00332225914 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78140360288 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2547440017 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162758395163 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483794570831 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033071418781 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894770820022 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187893726152 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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