The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The diagram provides with information on the life cycle of a salmon fish.
Overall, it can be seen that there are eight stages of salmon's life on the diagram. They are distributed among two circles: river and ocean.
Firstly, salmon begins its life in a river incubating in the eggs. After emergencies, salmon tend to rear in the freshwater and migrate to the estuary where it continues rearing in another surrounding. During the time salmon staying in the ocean, they are growing and getting mature while consuming plenty of food. Afterwards, fish migrate back to the river where they start spawning to procreate. The cycle ends at the stage of spawning which is followed by incubation beginning everything over and over.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 606.0 965.302439024 63% => OK
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00826446281 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60767048511 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661157024793 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.588805888 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.75 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236460319841 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112097314263 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119560589208 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217774839259 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123420850786 0.0819641961636 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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