The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production.

The presented diagram demonstrates the process of making energy by people in their own houses in the nearest future.
Overall, this process implies the usage of six main components. Power generation begins in a steel tank, after several steps the energy keeps in the battery and becomes available for consuming.
Firstly, electricity is produced by applying the methane gas, generated due to water and compost ferments, which fills the steel tank on the three quarters. typically, the contents of the compost are leaves, food scraps and others. The gas releases from this mass, conveys to the special methane gas storage and then gets in the compressor.
further, compressed methane fuels the combustion engine, which produces mechanical energy. This energy is transferred to the generator, where the energy of mechanics turns into the electrical energy, which accumulates in the battery. Eventually, electricity gets from the electrical energy storage to be used in the house.

Votes
Average: 8.5 (18 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Typically
...s the steel tank on the three quarters. typically, the contents of the compost are leaves...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Further
...orage and then gets in the compressor. further, compressed methane fuels the combustio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42483660131 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71977111912 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5634909982 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820206690589 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330254231983 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409472577215 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549712650879 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405310875276 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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