The diagram below shows the process of generating electricity from coal.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process of generating electricity from coal.

The diagram illustrates information about the stages of generating electricity from coal for the power industry.

It can clearly be seen that there are nine steps for electricity manufacturing. At the first step, coal is put into pulverizer from coal supply system and at the last step, the electricity is transformed and transmitted to households and facilities.

At the beginning of the process, as soon as coal is collected from the mine, it is put into the pulverizer which allows coal to be crushed. Next, after being transported through the stack with the dust collection system, pulverized coal is boiled in the boiler. Besides, the ash produced in the boiler is taken to the ash system in order to disposal.

At the following stage in the process, the airflow heated from coal boiling makes the turbine rotate and changes heat energy to kinetic energy which used to run the generator and create electricity. Also, the hot air flow from boiler to the turbine is cooled down by a cooling system with a condenser and blown to the boiler again. In the end, electricity is transitted to the substation with the purpose of being transmitted to households and facilities.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82875176488 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0238014308 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297722420809 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122489400895 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103255051201 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205250410103 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836223880546 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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