The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the progress of brick production for the building industry. There are 7 big steps in the process of brick manufacturing.
First, the digger will be selecting clay on the ground. Then the mix of clay and ground that has just been selected will be clarified through a metal grid so as to only keep the high-quality clay. The clay will be put on a roller in the second step. It is going to be mixed with water and sand after that. Next, a wire cutter will perfectly cut the mixture into bricks, or molds will be used to make out the shape of bricks. In the fourth step, the bricks will be put in a drying oven for about 24-48 hours. After that, there are 3 little paces in the fifth step. To begin with, the bricks will be organized in a kiln with moderate temperature (200⁰C - 980⁰C). Moreover, the temperature will be increased to higher, from 870⁰C - 1300⁰C. And lastly, the bricks will be moved to a cooling chamber and kept there for 48-72 hours. Finally, the bricks will be packaged together and delivered in a container to the customers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... will be clarified through a metal grid so as to only keep the high-quality clay. The cl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5412371134 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47513141271 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592783505155 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7817420833 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.7692307692 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968193004538 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471736298727 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536864933147 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138020555184 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802146718009 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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