The given diagram illustrates how milk is processed and produced for retail purposes.
First of all,cows are allowed to graze on the agricultural land, that they can produce milk. They they are then milk twice a day by machinery and stored the milk in a refrigerator to ensure, It stays fresh. A milk tanker then collect the milk and delivers to the diary where it can produced further.
After this, the diary converts milk into either pasteurised and packaged milk, so that it is a safe and convenient for customer to use or it is turned into other diary product that can then be Finally, the products are sent to the supermarket and shops, in order to be sold to the public.
Overall, this process begins with cows grazing and ends with milk and dairy produce being sold in shops. It is a nine stage linear man - made process.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cows
...duced for retail purposes. First of all,cows are allowed to graze on the agricultura...
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Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: They
...tural land, that they can produce milk. They they are then milk twice a day by machinery ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'produce'
Suggestion: produce
... and delivers to the diary where it can produced further. After this, the diary conve...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e it can produced further. After this, the diary converts milk into either past...
^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er to be sold to the public. Overall, this process begins with cows grazing an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59060402685 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41591022644 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9005472951 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182859909433 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856717654694 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417824430879 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116086413198 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275631437938 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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