The diagram gives an insight about the ocean thermal energy conversion that helps to produce electricity.
It is crystal clear that the evacuated evaporation chamber, turbine and condensing chamber are the three major components for the production of electricity. When it comes to sun , it has a crucial role to give a heat to the surface water and this warm water transfers into the evacuated evaporation chamber , this chamber helps to boil the water and generates the water vapours . Having completed this process, the vapours rotate the turbine for generating electricity. After this, the vapours enter in condensing chamber which are cooled by the sea water and then the vapours are condensed in this chamber in order to produce drinking water. Meanwhile, the salt water is discharged into the ocean.
Overall, the production of electricity is very convenient with the aid of ocean thermal energy conversion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion of electricity. When it comes to sun , it has a crucial role to give a heat to...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s into the evacuated evaporation chamber , this chamber helps to boil the water an...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he water and generates the water vapours . Having completed this process, the vapo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29452054795 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78999350912 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.654437571 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129340855632 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881503220552 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110708241897 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180168721884 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112834974603 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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