The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).
The diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity by using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Overall, the system creates electricity using the different temperatures between deep cold ocean water and warm tropical surface waters.
To begin, before flowing into an evacuated evaporation chamber, warm seawater is converted into water vapour by solar energy, the temperature to heat up the surface of the ocean can be up to 29 degrees. Next, inside the chamber, salt and saltless water vapour are separated from saltless water vapour. While entering into a condensing chamber, saltless water vapour turns a turbine rotate and the electricity is then generated as a result.
Turning to the following stages, inside the condensing chamber, saltless water vapour is cooled by the cold water from the depths of the ocean, the temperature using to freeze at this stage can increase to maximal 5 degrees. After that, at the same time, salt water waste is recharged from cold seawater and the process also produces drinking water; and all steps above can be repeated.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292307692308 0.268076937826 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.158974358974 0.116061578633 137% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102564102564 0.0759168565197 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0153846153846 0.0366838410393 42% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.112820512821 0.155750635184 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0769230769231 0.0379272487307 203% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.60959610605 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0307692307692 0.0210936926555 146% => OK
Particles: 0.00512820512821 0.00175180941692 293% => OK
Determiners: 0.128205128205 0.0948980150116 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153846153846 0.00437022459523 352% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1093.0 1161.00487805 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.9 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24571428571 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417142857143 0.337110787985 124% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314285714286 0.247514529752 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217142857143 0.171178102325 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114285714286 0.112407865282 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60959610605 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 47.7419832039 49.3433353143 97% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0094962315 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3378316622 42.9750493124 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.142857143 135.714022679 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.0094962315 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.689975730869 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 56.4285714286 47.7609492067 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.76470588235 2.94281807926 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375641334949 0.418131533498 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.191679149688 0.181151798455 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0503419843817 0.0850326197045 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.716119919667 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0809938808294 0.157042692854 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232508061379 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200605405886 0.108899403657 184% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.39453976756 0.367819155151 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.138108872827 0.0812612215331 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329705228722 0.316326947829 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186109637943 0.0921553760075 202% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.