The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant..

The diagram give information about how recycling of plastic.
Overall, there are essentially six stages in the plastic, recycling process, begins with the shops and buys, bags and processing, third stages is collecting and landfill, storing house and driving. However, we can see clear more if we look at the specific stage.
In the first stage, new product displayed in shops are purchased, used and thrown away. After people buying and use we will often walkaway and become bags and rubbish, sties landfill. Bags and rubbish will be collecting. Plastic bottles and containers for recycling. After being gathered, the plastic bottles are taken to sorting houses where they are divided into differ categories.
When plastic bottles are driven by containers and going to factory, will have many machines and the observer to creat a finished product made of plastic. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. So, it can bee seen that the product of plastic is very difficult but it have benefits for environment.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...uct of plastic is very difficult but it have benefits for environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24855491329 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64366043442 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3673709521 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2356985283 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942503457243 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137324018917 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153433723725 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960120498345 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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