The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how the cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram provided gives information on the different steps and apparatus required for producing cement and also renders the process of preparing concrete from the cement for the purpose of the building.
From the first figure, we can observe that limestone and clay are together crushed in order to produce a powder which is sent through the mixer for blending purpose. The mixture now reaches the rotating heater which supplies flame from the other end of the cylinder. After several rotations, the product is sent to the grinder where the cement is made into fine powder and the final product is now packed into bags.
In the second figure, the production of concrete was shown which is of a single step. In this stage, cement, water, sand and small stones called gravel are added in different compositions. In particular, water is used in the least quantity of 10% followed by 15% cement. In ascending order, the amount of sand placed in a concrete mixer is about one-fourth and gravel occupies nearly half of the total composition. All the above ingredients of required quantities are added into a concrete mixer and rotated gradually which finally results in concrete.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The diagram provided gives information o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ement for the purpose of the building. From the first figure, we ca...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nal product is now packed into bags. In the second figure, the production of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...el are added in different compositions. In particular, water is used in the least ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01530612245 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52613886218 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4613781797 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224797096694 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829145956404 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837034384518 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164138343103 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924552873437 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.