The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how the cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose.
The diagrammatic representation depicts the procedures through which cement and concrete are made.
Overall, it can be manifested that the process of cement making comprises of total four steps which commence with crushing of limestone and clay and culminates with the packaging of cement into bags. While the process of concrete making has only one step of mixing all the raw materials.
Initially, on the first stage, the limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder. Once the powder has been formed, it is put into the mixture machine to amalgamate it properly. Having been mixed properly, this mixture sent to the rotating heater followed by grinding of it. The fine powder which has received after grinding procedure is a cement. Finally, the cement is packed into bags.
Secondly, in the process of concrete production, among the whole concrete mixer, half proportion (50%) of gravel and one fourth (25%) proportion of sand is used. The cement and water used by a proportion of 15% and 10% respectively. All these raw material are mixed by a concrete mixture machine to make concrete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...ested that the process of cement making comprises of total four steps which commence with cr...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...with the packaging of cement into bags. While the process of concrete making has only...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68580173775 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7738895872 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3636363636 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235621207075 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880928957086 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574062535745 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140050194968 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428011748819 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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