the diagram below shows the stages and equipment is used in cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose.
The given to diagrams depicts the steps and equipments involved in production of cement and concrete. The stages are clearly and coherently represented.
At a glance, there are five steps involved in cement manufacturing; Crushing, Mixing, Heating, Grinding and Packaging, and only one step is involved in concrete preparation; which is mixing.
By visualising the first diagram, which is for cement preparation, it can be seen that two raw materials; limestone and clay, are crushed to form a fine powder. This powder is then mixed well in the mixer, and passed to Rotary heater for heating the contents. The heated material is then ground in the Grinder to form fine particles of cement which is packed in bags of suitable capacity.
In the second diagram, which gives process for concrete manufacturing, it can be observed that four raw materials; cement, water, sand and gravel are required. The gravel which is used is small stones. The proportions for gravel, sand, water and cement are 50%, 25%, 10% and 15% respectively. The measured quantities are introduced in concrete mixer to form concrete of desired consistency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...are 50%, 25%, 10% and 15% respectively. The measured quantities are introduced in c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20765027322 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87471168517 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5635819487 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258160324615 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990360648485 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462697446349 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147437944574 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605209291637 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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