the diagrams below shows the stages and equipments used in cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose.
The two given diagrams depicts the steps and equipments involved in production of cement and concrete. The stages are clearly and coherently represented.
At a glance, there are five steps involved in cement manufacturing; crushing, mixing, heating, grinding and packaging, and only one step is involved in concrete preparation; which is, mixing.
By visualising the first diagram, for cement preparation, two raw materials; Limestone and Clay, are crushed to fine powder. The powder is then mixed well and passed in Rotary heater, where the contents are heated. The heated material is then ground to form fine particles of cement, which is packed in bags of suitable capacity.
In the second diagram, for concrete manufacturing, four raw materials; cement, water, sand and gravel are used. The proportions for gravel, sand, water and cement are 50%, 25%, 10% and 15% respectively. The measured quantities are introduced in concrete mixer to form concrete of required consistency.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48366013072 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94666155203 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5496522877 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2222222222 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233560256389 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956175150939 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540732467926 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136147092075 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489834869254 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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