The diagram illustrates the process that is used to make leather products. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture gives information about how the leather products are made.
Overall, it can be seen that there are five stages in this process, starting from collecting the animal skin and ending with the finished leather products.
At the first stage, the animal skin is collected and transported to the factory. After that it is washed with water and lime before soaking with the lime for the first time. Then it is soaked for the second time with tannin which is combined by water and vegetable matter after flattening by flatted machine.
At the fourth stage of this process, this skin is polished. Finally, it is transported to the factory and used to make the finished leather products.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 582.0 965.302439024 60% => OK
No of words: 118.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93220338983 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38266747163 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 177.3 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2578894004 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1428571429 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12698028666 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684421788213 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871513534941 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945098149926 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070408075992 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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