The diagram show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes
The given flow diagram highlights the information about the process of cement and concrete production by some equipment and material.
It can be seen that, there are four steps ofbthe cement production firstly we need some limestone and clay that two material crush the help of crusher, after that material gain in the farm of powder then powder mix in the mixee after then powder heat with the help of rotating heater, furthermore grind the powder in the grinder lastly cement production fill in the bags
As far as trend, is concerned there are five different step of concrete production. firstly we need 15% cement and 10% water and third step is sand that is 25% then the second last step has gravel 50% then the all material mix in the concrete mixer that is final step.
Overall, it is evident that the steps of making cement are more complicated are require advance machinery while concrete production mixing of components in the right proportion in machine.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...astly cement production fill in the bags As far as trend, is concerned there are ...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'steps'?
Suggestion: steps
..., is concerned there are five different step of concrete production. firstly we need...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
..., is concerned there are five different step of concrete production. firstly we need...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
... different step of concrete production. firstly we need 15% cement and 10% water and th...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
... making cement are more complicated are require advance machinery while concrete produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83734939759 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42283285233 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.436495918 43.030603864 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.75 112.824112599 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.5 22.9334400587 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.75 5.23603664747 339% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15875857554 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121776250155 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683015052507 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120767006034 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692581528061 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.2329268293 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.4329268293 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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