The diagram shows how sports shoes are made.
The stipulated pictogram manifest information about the process of manufacturing of sports shoes.
Overall, the key points to note all that production of shoes is a time-consuming process which takes 18 months for its preparation and initiates from choice of the design and terminates with their distribution.
Apropos the detail of the diagram, that patterns of shoes selected in computers. Interestingly, on the basis of these designs all raw materials such as Stanley leather, mill fabric and Rubber sole collected from discrete Industries to one common factory. After that, various shapes of these soles formed with the help of stiching machine as well as these upper parts attached with bottoms by glue and laces tie up on the shoes. Finally, shoes are ready.
Moving to the more precise details of the diagram, that these shoes are packed into large boxes and number of boxes packed into one gigantic container which has approximately 5500 pairs of shoes. Moreover,now these containers stored in the factory where they are transported to the distributors by ships and export to the local shops for selling. Apart from this entire procedure consumes 18 months. As a result, it is a lengthy and tough process.
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...ing machine as well as these upper parts attached with bottoms by glue and laces ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17676767677 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78191152474 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.2281091112 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114323680749 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523705345148 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063112234637 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652587907344 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157092658317 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.