The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

The diagram illustrates the stages of the life of a honey bee.

Overall, the life cycle of honey bee lasts between 34 and 36 days. From the diagram, it can be seen that the cycle consists of 5 main stages, from being an egg till maturity.

The life cycle begins with the female honey bees laying eggs. On average, a female bee lays 1 or 2 eggs every 3 days. After 9 to 10 days, each egg hatches and the nymph appears. The nymph then experience a stage called moulting, which consists of 3 phases that lasts for 5, 7 and 9 days, respectively.

At around day 30, young adult bee emerges from its moulting stage. In the next 4 days, the bee continues to grow in size. Finally, at between 34 to 36 days from the beginning, the bee has reached full maturity. The female bees then begin to lay eggs, making the life cycle repeat.

Votes
Average: 7.6 (152 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30573248408 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25979146624 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611464968153 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6092266795 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4545454545 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377848561287 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172298432254 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163345731124 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299258673616 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127653887563 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 61.2550243902 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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