Essay topics:
The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee
The diagram presents the life of honey bee, which lasts from 34 to 36 days. Overall, it is evident that there are five main stages in the life cycle a honey bee.
The life cycle of the honey bee begins when female honey bees lay eggs. Each honey bee can lay 1 or 2 eggs every three days. After 9 to 10 days, eggs will hatch to become immature insects.
The nymphs moult 3 times during about 21 days. After that, they develop to become young adult emerges. Finally, in the next 4 days, they are mature and can begin to breed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... stages in the life cycle a honey bee. The life cycle of the honey bee begins w...
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...will hatch to become immature insects. The nymphs moult 3 times during about 21...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 433.0 965.302439024 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 102.0 196.424390244 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24509803922 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17797182781 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.76941093902 2.65546596893 67% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 127.8 283.868780488 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.1237112717 43.030603864 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.125 112.824112599 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.75 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389607620768 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16923089395 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187788964721 0.0843802449381 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274871346601 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205306387896 0.0819641961636 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 13.2329268293 38% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 11.4140731707 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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