The diagram shows life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of silk cloth
The provided two diagrammatical representations reveal: silkworm's life cycle, and manufacturing of silk cloth.
As it is presented in diagram, that the life cycle of silkworm has four stages i.e from eggs to moth. however, production of silk cloth require five levels, selection to weave the clothes.
Having a glance at life stages of silkworm, is that, a female worm lay eggs. then, after ten days grows as larvae, and consume mulberry leaves as its food source. after, passing a month larva began to form silk thread then, becomes cocoon which after sixteen days grow as moth.
for producing silk cloth, cocoon selection is done. after that, cocoon is boiled in water which then, is followed by unwinding thread into 300 to 900 metres. after twisting, either the thread can be weaved or dyed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... has four stages i.e from eggs to moth. however, production of silk cloth require five ...
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...kworm, is that, a female worm lay eggs. then, after ten days grows as larvae, and co...
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...ume mulberry leaves as its food source. after, passing a month larva began to form si...
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...which after sixteen days grow as moth. for producing silk cloth, cocoon selection ...
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...g silk cloth, cocoon selection is done. after that, cocoon is boiled in water which t...
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...nwinding thread into 300 to 900 metres. after twisting, either the thread can be weav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96268656716 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54232385017 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701492537313 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5016508123 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8888888889 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321265609531 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130082290483 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121923616218 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218380015377 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151421594782 0.0819641961636 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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