The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth.
The diagram reveals the information about the stages of the silkworm cycle and the procedure of the silk cloth. It is clear, and coherent representation.
There the life cycle of silkworm involve the four stages; from first stage egges to last stage concoon. On other side, the production of silk cloth; from select water to last step dye or woven.
At the first stage cycle of silkworm the moth lays its eggs after the 10 days silleworm larva is hatch from eggs use the mulberry leaf as a food. Moving ahead , after 4-6 weeks the silk thread is nade from larva, and the last step of the life cycle of silkworm is cocoon made.
In the second diagram show that the production of silk cloth. It involve the six stages. In the first stage select the silk, and boil the water. After the boiling, the silk thread is made up the cocoon is unwounded, and then sevral strand are twisted together. At the last two stages, the thread firstly dyed or then woven into silk fabric, or if we can woven first, and dyed subsequently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...atch from eggs use the mulberry leaf as a food. Moving ahead , after 4-6 weeks the sil...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he mulberry leaf as a food. Moving ahead , after 4-6 weeks the silk thread is nade...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'involves'?
Suggestion: involves
...w that the production of silk cloth. It involve the six stages. In the first stage sele...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'weave' or 'be woven'?
Suggestion: weave; be woven
...en woven into silk fabric, or if we can woven first, and dyed subsequently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54594594595 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21693859676 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535135135135 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9595260749 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4545454545 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450178122502 0.215688989381 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182997774652 0.103423049105 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170519008481 0.0843802449381 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29241210351 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740202781046 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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