the diagram shows the manufacturing process of sugar from sugar cane
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where possible
The diagram illustrates how the sugar is being synthesized from the sugar cane starting from the fields to the factory.
Overall, sugar canes are grown in fields for 12-18 months, then harvested and goes through step-wise process with the help of automated machines in the factories and end up as clear sugar crystals.
After 12-18 months, the sugar canes are harvested by both humans and modified harvesting automobiles. Following harvest, sugar canes are introduced into crushing machine, which crushes them and produce sugar cane juice. The impurities in the juice is filtered with limestone filter, in this step clarified juice is extracted by filtration. Then the juice is heated up in a evaporator and the liquid sugar cane juice changes to syrup form.
Sugar crystals in the syrup is seperated from the water content by using the centrifuagtion method. Now the crystallized sugar is allowed to be dried and cooled. This is the step wise process in manufaturing of crystal sugar from sugar cane.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16463414634 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65682284214 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7273626853 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297034435415 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146993523687 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898336391513 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210806143298 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585625893533 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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