The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned.

The diagram depicts how clones are make in sheep embryos.

A quick glance at pictures is quite enough to make it clear that the clone making process accomplish within five stages which begins with two parallel steps from two different female sheeps namely A and B. However, ending three steps are singular upto preparation of clone of sheep A in sheep C.

First of all, the clone making procedure initiate with the collection of body cell from sheep A. Whereas, at the same time egg cell must be taken from sheep B. As soon as body cell and egg cell are gained through both the sheeps A and B respectively, the next step is DNA extraction from body cell and removal of nucleus from egg cell with this whole work first stage is completed. Thereafter DNA from sheep A and egg cell from sheep B will collide each other. These fused cell develops into embryo of sheep C that is placed in uterus of foster mother with this last second step is finished. In the end the produced lamb is clone of sheep A.

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Average: 8.8 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...paration of clone of sheep A in sheep C. First of all, the clone making procedure...
^^^^
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thereafter,
...is whole work first stage is completed. Thereafter DNA from sheep A and egg cell from shee...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, whereas, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44565217391 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20006014697 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8516684999 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186907012353 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960305172652 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392708272984 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146180076492 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254644794415 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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