The diagrams below contain information regarding percentages of people occupied in various types of position in 1998 and 2001.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
Write at least 150 words
The above diagrams demonstrate Employment percentages for various positions during 1998 and 2001. The types of positions mentioned above are Full time, Part time, Self-employed, Contract, Casual, Unemployed.
The most popular Job type is Full time in both 1998 and 2001 occupying 37% and 27% respectively. However, Part time job has declined from 27% to 21%. In the year 1998, self-employed type had 19% of the proportion and the figure remained same in 2001. Moreover, there is a significant rise in the Contract based jobs by almost 50%.
Further on, the Casual type position remained static during the both periods. Nevertheless, Unemployed percentage saw an increment from 2% to more than tripled. Although there was a dip in proportion occupied by Part time jobs, there was a substantial decrement in Full time jobs percentage.
To recapitulate, Full time jobs were occupying apex in proportion during the both years, Casual and self-employed had a slight increase in their percent. Unemployment has grown from 2% to 7%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Fulltime
... types of positions mentioned above are Full time, Part time, Self-employed, Contract, Ca...
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Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Part-time
...ositions mentioned above are Full time, Part time, Self-employed, Contract, Casual, Unemp...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mployed, Contract, Casual, Unemployed. The most popular Job type is Full time in b...
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Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Fulltime
...employed. The most popular Job type is Full time in both 1998 and 2001 occupying 37% and...
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Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Part-time
...ying 37% and 27% respectively. However, Part time job has declined from 27% to 21%. In th...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Part-time
...ere was a dip in proportion occupied by Part time jobs, there was a substantial decrement...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Fulltime
...s, there was a substantial decrement in Full time jobs percentage. To recapitulate, Ful...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Fulltime
...ime jobs percentage. To recapitulate, Full time jobs were occupying apex in proportion ...
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Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Unemployment has grown from 2% to 7%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03354977583 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1564964771 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134084324896 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060366160953 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733650534554 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927892413504 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610770196194 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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