The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pictures illustrate the ingredients that go into a factory for the manufacture of frozen fish pies and the various steps in its production line.
The fish pie contains salmon, peas, sauce, and potatoes, and there are ten stages in its manufacture, from delivery to dispatch. One of the ingredients, the potato, goes through its six-stage preparation process before it is added to the pie.
Potatoes are the first ingredients to be prepared in the production line from delivery in up to one month, and then, they will be cleaned, peeled, and sliced. At this stage, potatoes are boiled, chilled, then stored and wrapped.
The next product line is fresh salmon which is the second ingredient in the procedure. It will be added lemon juice and a bit of salt, to be prepared about 12 hours or less from delivery to the steam oven, and then, the staff will remove skins and bones from it, and inspect it to ensure a quality product. At this particular stage in the process has been completed, prepared peas and sauce will be added to the fish. Eventually, fish pies are wrapped, frozen, and transported to the stored or dispatched
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... salt, to be prepared about 12 hours or less from delivery to the steam oven, and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77551020408 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60615920579 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4650420055 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840005100577 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447124322558 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491328940512 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627221835154 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438585001498 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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