The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The two pictures illustrate the structure of a wind turbine and design its position.
In general, the first picture shows information about the main features of the wind turbine and how to make electricity, the second picture describes optimum locations of the turbine.
At the start of the process, the wind impacts the blade of the turbine which is made by fiberglass or wood. when the turbine turns, the generator is activated and produces the electricity with 1.5 megawatts output. on top of the generator, wind sensors have functions that info the data to computer on the land to controls the speed and direction for the turbine. the big steel lower will carry all of systems on the top.
Following that the turbine is designed to place some good place. The higher the turbine will have the stronger the wind. the high turbine will maximize the wind strength, especially on the hill. Some domestic turbines have 100-kilowatts output, which is sufficient for households. it also has a drawback which spoiled the landscape instead of turbines placed off the coast
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98882681564 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61862830396 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59217877095 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5840655527 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25732594641 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917966363709 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677088809861 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166761772628 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600937133753 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.