The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas that are prone to flooding Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making compa

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The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas that are prone to flooding.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The illustrations reveal the mechanisms of keeping the buildings in vulnerable areas secured from flooding.
In overview, two common patterns to avert flooding due to the internal runoff regards the utilization of a stopbank. Even though both methods require the lift of the house floor level, the height of used stilts can be minimized with the addition of the stopbank.
In the first case, the stopbank serves as the flood barrier to shield the buildings against the elevating level of a nearby river or drain. It is a small mound of land between the houses and the river, which is higher than the 100-year flood level of that river, creating an internal pond. In order to regulate the amount of water inside that internal pond, the berm and floodgate are applied to direct the runoff water back to the river. Therefore, the houses are merely constructed to be upper the level of the internal ponding.
With regard to the absence of the stopbank, the houses in the flood-prone areas are facing the flood level of the nearby river directly, without any barrier. As a solution, the floor level of the buildings is required towering stilts to be raised. For safety concerns, their height should exceed the 100-year flood level of 300mm, considered the freeboard.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91121495327 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51172897153 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2299401568 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.1 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100264778882 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043842990912 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296193367154 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062622745826 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294173451798 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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