The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A glance at the diagrams reveals the life cycle os salmon. In general, the life cycle of these species includes four stages.

In the early life of these species, salmon eggs are laid under the reeds and scattered between small stones on upper rivers where the slow is slowly moving. After approximately five or six months, the egg turns into 'fry' which is three to eight centimeters long.

The 'fry', afterward, swims down waterfalls into lower rivers which have fast flows. There, the species grow up in a period of around four years. After that, form the 'fry', the fish grows up and turns into 'smolt', which is 12-15 cm long.

'Smolts', in the third stage of their life, swim into the open sea and live there for at least five years. There, they fully-grow into 'adult salmons' and their lengths vary between 70 and 76 cm. The 'adult salmons' swim back to upper rivers and lay eggs again. The species, eventually, come to an end of their life cycle.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, at least, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05862183886 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0359863198 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9090909091 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131791373986 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573831974437 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056875323819 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946629258719 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741284911444 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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