The diagrams illustrates the life cycle of samon which account for a type of big fishe.
Overall, there are three stages in the process, begiing with breeding eggs under small stones beside the reeds. Furthermore, it took approximately 9 to 10 years for turning an egg into an adult salmon.
To begin with, adult salmons lay eggs under small stones among the reeds in upper river. After passing approximately 5 to 6 months these eggs turn to fry with the size of 3 to 8 cm. Next, the fries swim towards the lower river where the current is faster. Prior to moving to the open sea they stay in this area for 4 years to grow older and reach the average length of 14cm. In this stage of their life they are called smolt. Finally, it took 5 years for smolts to be adults reach to 76cm length when they swim back to the upper river where slow moving current made a proper condition for breeding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The diagrams illustrates the life cycle of samon which account f...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... stones among the reeds in upper river. After passing approximately 5 to 6 months the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37951807229 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19806886832 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1654672584 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7777777778 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0757050316793 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370177971673 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039039040882 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630434221576 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386607776004 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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