The food scarcity is a major problem in many countries despite the profound improvement has been made in agricultural sectors. I believe exploring the causes of this problem can assist in finding suitable solution to resolve it.
To begin with, the main reason for scattering hunger all around the globe is the global warming. To clarify, rising the overall temperature of the earth on a yearly basis on the one hand, and the subsequent natural disastrous stem from this phenomenon, on the other hand, makes the condition worst for germination. Furthermore, the widespread use of chemical fertilizers in order to taking advantage of soil's full-capacity fosters the soli-degradation. The constant use of this chemical substance makes the land exhausted. As a result, the rate for suitable land for farming decrease gradually and the food cannot be provided for ever-growing population.
However, to alleviating the hunger the governments should raise the public awareness about the global warming which its main reason is the Carbon emitting from car. They also should be encouraged to recycle their wastes and be more conscious about their natural resources .Moreover; the agricultural practice should become more systematic by some specialists monitoring the farming activities. To clarify, if an agricultural academic professional dictate farmers what types of crops each should be cultivate, not only wide variety of yield would be always available within the country all season round but also ensure the soil's health. However, some studies also needed to be made on finding natural fertilizers that not harm the farmlands.
In conclusion, even though there are a lot of reasons associated with the lack of food supply, by the right action from the governments and individuals themselves it can be tackled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38947368421 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95817983684 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0901382468 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183524459397 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624243581618 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409123196102 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106536221453 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571180600941 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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